Reflection response: review and adjust!

PLEASE REVIEW AND MAKE ADJUSTMENTS according to the instructor’s response..

 Response from my teacher:

I just looked over your assignment. You have a good start. You have identified the main idea from the article. Please work on the following:

  • Present your assignment in third person point of view. This is a formal assignment and not a personal narrative.
  • Revise the thesis statement so that it lists two points that support the viewpoint or perspective.
  • Once you identify the two points, then use the first point listed to write a topic sentence for the second paragraph. The details that follow must support the topic sentence.
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